I like the list for the most part and believe that the decisions for what to cut and what to keep in each section are well-reasoned.
My main concern is with whether too much is being asked from Nia Frome's 5-10 minute "Tankies" article.
The way I see it is that while the first two sections do more than a good enough job of correcting misconceptions about Marxism, they do not do an adequate job (in my opinion) of addressing the 'elephant in the room' for most people, which is AES.
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