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Hi, I'd appreciate feedback on some stories I've written recently: (mastodon.phoenixtrap.com)
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@writing Hi, I'd appreciate feedback on some stories I've written recently:

- "Between": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/between/

- "Abigail Sterling": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/abigail-sterling/

- "The Beautiful Prison": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/the-beautiful-prison/

- "La Petite Mort": https://thebeautifulprison.com/stories/la-petite-mort/

I openly disclose that they are AI-assisted in character creation, development, and in their writing, but they're emphatically not low-effort AI slop.

All have appropriate content warnings and estimated reading times.

Thanks for your time.

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